i Anthony:

We will be posting your review of Page France today on the site and I
would prefer if it was your last piece that you write for the site.
Your reviews are just too time-consuming for me to edit into a condition
that I feel comfortable posting on the site.

Thank you for all of the effort that you have expended in writing for
our site and good luck in all of your future endeavors.


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Todd

The problem with your writing?

It's full of run-on sentences, sentence fragments, "its" "it's" "there"
"their" issues, and it doesn't flow very well oftentimes.  Your ability
to construct a coherent narrative throughout a review seemed to be a
problem with most of the things that you sent to us: obviously this
stuff made sense in your head and you wrote it out, but it seemed like
your mind was moving way too fast for your fingers.  Most of the things
that you turned in were struck by a lightning-quick intellect hampered
by not being able to clearly identify or explain the ideas that you were
presenting.


Todd